Pitching film to BTEC Media class- Still Editing

last week, we pitched our short film even though it wasn't fully finished yet to a class of BTEC Media to see if they understood the film, and if they had any suggestion to improve. this wasn't particularly useful as they did not talk much however from this we did gain a few opinions.

• good: liked the storyline, thought it was a good idea
• bad: one of the parts didn't make sense to them so need to make it clearer/re-edit.